2nd pitch presentation

In Wednesday's lesson me and Aaron presented our new pitch that we all created as group since the feedback and constructive criticism feedback given from the previous pitch we had given to our fellow classmates and teacher Sean.  

This is our pitch presentation that we presented and it was also recorded.

Feedback for Pitch

We got mixed feedback from our pitch presentation last Wednesday but the majority was positive. Some of the positive feedback back was about:

• the video has potential
• who the artist is
• use of terminology

However we also had some constructive criticism on our pitch but we took this positively and now believe as a group we can build on this and focus on certain parts to improve them as much as we can. The bad points were made about:

• the narrative being slightly confusing
• no storyboard or mood board ( even though we had them finished - forgot to use them)
• no animatic
• what the artist look liked

These are a few of the feedback sheets our fellow classmates and our teacher Sean filled out during our pitch and what we are using to improve our artist and music video.

Script for The Pitch

In today's lesson after Laxmi created the script for us to read alongside our PowerPoint presentation for our pitch on Monday, we decided who would be reading certain parts of the PowerPoint with the hand out to read from.

I have three slides to talk about we all divided the pitch up separately so everyone has an equal and talk about our artist and digipak. My first slide to talk about is the concept for the digipak this going to give our fellow students and teacher who are artist is and some brief information about her, such as: fashion, career so far and the reason for her album. Also the second slide tells the audience the narrative for the music video. Finally my final slide of the pitch that I am sharing with the audience is about why we have chosen that certain narrative and how it will connect with her fans/target audience.

Pitch Contribution

As a group over the half term we have to create a pitch to present to our fellow classmates and teachers on the whole concept of who are artist is and the music video we are going to produce alongside a song of our choice. To make this process easier we decided to do some aspects of the pitch as a group such as the storyboard because this is crucial part of the music video. Also we all need to have our personal opinions and imaginative ideas brought together. So from deciding on this idea we split the rest of the pitch between the four of us, my task for the pitch was to: EXPLANATION OF WHY YOU HAVE DECIDED ON THIS CONCEPT AND HOW IT WILL APPEAL TO THE TARGET AUDIENCE AND 'FIT' INTO THE MUSIC INDUSTRY. DISCUSS THE INFLUENCES YOU HAVE HAD.

This is my part of the pitch: