Feedback for Pitch

We got mixed feedback from our pitch presentation last Wednesday but the majority was positive. Some of the positive feedback back was about:

• the video has potential
• who the artist is
• use of terminology

However we also had some constructive criticism on our pitch but we took this positively and now believe as a group we can build on this and focus on certain parts to improve them as much as we can. The bad points were made about:

• the narrative being slightly confusing
• no storyboard or mood board ( even though we had them finished - forgot to use them)
• no animatic
• what the artist look liked

These are a few of the feedback sheets our fellow classmates and our teacher Sean filled out during our pitch and what we are using to improve our artist and music video.