Feedback on Second Screening

In Wednesday's lesson we presented are second screening of our music video so far  to the class and Sean. Before coming into the class we knew we did not have a lot of shots and that some of the artist (poppy) lip syncing was matched up right with the song. In addition the animatics was in the background of the video when it was playing. We also knew a prior the screening that we need to do some serious work on getting the video to best standard we can do, by shooting a lot more and spending my time on the video.

We got some feedback from Sean some of our fellow classmates on the video, here are two examples: